| = heart and time | Diana Todea [26.Jan.09 20:10] |
| Is interesting to perceive how can a heart transforms into a clock and from a pure energy the heart becomes pure time. Anyway I like to think at your poem in an abstract way, although it was enigmatic in its sense. But anyone could draw his own conclusion, right? | |
| = . | Laurenşiu Ion [26.Jan.09 20:59] |
| yes, it's abstract I must addmit of course, you can do anything you want with this poem from now on it's yours thanks for your sign! | |
| + the clock | Marius Surleac [26.Jan.09 21:57] |
| I like the abstract mood, the images used to attract reader's way of thinking - all this poem is like a surrealist canvas and probably some religion paths can be seen as well. Well done Laurentiu! Cheers, Marius | |
| = marius, | Laurenşiu Ion [26.Jan.09 22:26] |
| hmmm, it's the second star received today and I must addmit is a lucky one because it's the first here and also it's the second time you had discovered some religion paths in my poem this is a sign thanks! | |