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hello! / Claudiu GURGUTA
good evening
try and correct some of the following:
jump in your arms / try and write "jumps in
on "Happiness",
Poetry by radun gabor
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
typos!...and grammar!
on "Happiness",
Poetry by radun gabor
hi there! / Corina Gina Papouis
welcome to Agonia!
I have difficulties processing this text, it could be the way it is translated.
on "Happiness",
Poetry by radun gabor
My sincere opinion... / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I hope that I'm not hurting your feelings, but your poem gave the sensation that it's simplistic.
on "you",
Poetry by radulescu cristina
< comments > / Veronica Valeanu
Cristina, it is recommended for you to read more, analyse what you read in terms of poetic message,
on "is it a beautiful thing?",
Poetry by radulescu cristina
I hope that you will like it / radulescu cristina
it was my first poem
on "you",
Poetry by radulescu cristina
I hope that you will like it / radulescu cristina
Please, tell me what you think about it
on "is it a beautiful thing?",
Poetry by radulescu cristina
i understand... / Corina Gina Papouis
that feelings get in the way of life and we write about them...all the time...I think it would be go
on "something",
Personals by radulescu cristina
I hope that you will like it / radulescu cristina
I wrote it cause I was so unhappy and I hoped that somebody will read it and will understand what I
on "something",
Personals by radulescu cristina
I'm also aware of my own limitations :) / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Thank you very much for the comment. I know that it doesn't flows and I had some doubts if I should
on "I wish upon a star to change my ways",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
alina / Corina Gina Papouis
it takes a bit more to elevate this text to literature, they are pure thoughts, as you also stated a
on "I wish upon a star to change my ways",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
It's true:) / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I read your poem and I must admit that I feel the same. Who doesn't want a friend like that or even
on "alone in my mind",
Personals by Mitocariu Irina
to Corina Gina Papouis / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Thank you for the advice. I'll think of it.
Regards
Alina
on "When roses die",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
hmm... / Corina Gina Papouis
it starts ok, but towards the end is becoming too crowded with the word 'soul', the mystery gone,
on "A little control",
Poetry by Stocheciu Iulian Gabriel
< comments > / slavchyk
relevant to our time
on "The echo...",
Poetry by Mihai
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
please use a spell checker prior to posting texts. thank you!
on "symbol of truth",
Personals by Givemore Manyengawana
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
so what is the point of displaying them here? We can only allow texts in English on this site. I sug
on "City",
Poetry by slavchyk
to Corina Gina Papouis / slavchyk
I placed the same two texts in English first and the second is the same but the Ukrainian language
on "City",
Poetry by slavchyk
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
although it is better developed the rhythm of your poem is not flawless and the rhyming leaves also
on "When roses die",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
slavchyk / Corina Gina Papouis
Could you please post the text in your native language on the Russian version of Agonia. Many people
on "City",
Poetry by slavchyk
< comments > / slavchyk
inside - a person living two wolves, good and evil, you choose which one to feed
on "Adrenaline",
Poetry by Patrik Andrei Voicu
Fading roses / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I was afraid to extend the poem, because I thought that I might loose its essence, but I like very m
on "When roses die",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
the poem is quite simplistic, the idea needs further development, Buddha says it all so gracefully i
on "When roses die",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
to Corina Gina Papouis / slavchyk
here refers to the city as something big, stony, with all its buildings, roads and factories ...
ha
on "City",
Poetry by slavchyk
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
A form of a man - a shape of a man
garden instruments - garden tools
peoples - ? people is a plur
on "",
Poetry by Lara Biuts
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
Please pay attention to grammar and syntax before posting! Thanks!
Corina
on "",
Poetry by Lara Biuts
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
'sorbeste-nghititura of glass' - i guess this is a left over from the translation? some of the exp
on "Hemisphere",
Personals by Iurcencu Teodora Ioana
Lara / Corina Gina Papouis
I think I got the message of your essay, however, there are some grammar and syntax problems like:
on "",
Poetry by Lara Biuts
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
some of the expressions here are stating the obvious:
'he saw a city with buildings'
are there c
on "City",
Poetry by slavchyk
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
when translating a poem try and focus on the feeling of that verse rather than using the word-for-wo
on "You are in I am",
Poetry by Daniela Mihalciac
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
this text needs re-writing I think: is too simplistic.
you can do it!
cheers,
Corina
on "Adrenaline",
Poetry by Patrik Andrei Voicu
< comments > / Marius Surleac
First of all, please do not post the same text twice.
Second, about the content of the text: wou
on "Adrenaline",
Poetry by Patrik Andrei Voicu
I would say... / Corina Gina Papouis
I walk down the street
A snowflake hangs on fluffily
To my eyelash
..but even this does not re
on "Snowflake",
Poetry by Cezar C. Viziniuck
Are you sure that this is poetry or any literary work? / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
Here I see only a few interjections. in my point of view, this text hasn't any sens. where is its
on "This is how we generally communicate",
Poetry by George Mihaila
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
still a few mistakes and spelling problems. Please review! as for the message, well, that happens to
on "thoughts",
Personals by nicoleta goia
just a thought... / Corina Gina Papouis
i think the poem needs a bit more polishing, the word 'love' appears repeatedly weakening the mess
on "Poetry",
Poetry by nicoleta goia
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
the text above was presented here as a follow-up, however judging by the number of errors occurring
on "Seagulls",
Personals by Iurcencu Teodora Ioana
< comments > / Marius Surleac
anyone instead of any one
on "Obsession",
Poetry by Dr. Ram Mehta
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
spelling! check it!
cheers..
on "Lost...",
Poetry by Cezar C. Viziniuck
ok, Corina / Cezar Cătălin Viziniuck
Ok. Thank you.
on "Lost...",
Poetry by Cezar C. Viziniuck
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
please pay attention to spelling and grammar when posting!
Cheers,
Corina
on "We are different",
Personals by Pomana Sorin
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
I made a phone call to Amy Ann
her verse book
through
her eyes yet drowning
in the loss of
god/
on "Amy Ann",
Poetry by Dr. Ram Mehta
< comments > / Dr. Ram Mehta
Yes, you may not call it poetry. It is an expression of thoughts in verse. What would you term it?
on "Alchemy love gods",
Poetry by Dr. Ram Mehta
hmmm / Corina Gina Papouis
a good lesson in how chemicals affect our body...but not quite poetry, is it?
cheers,
Corina
on "Alchemy love gods",
Poetry by Dr. Ram Mehta
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
as a personal thought I guess this text is acceptable. I noticed the attempt of using rhymes which d
on "Take control of your mind",
Personals by Horaţiu Puşcă
yes... / Horaţiu Puşcă
Thank you for your observation, Corina! It's more good to write like that, "worry" replaced by "
on "Take control of your mind",
Personals by Horaţiu Puşcă
< comments > / Corina Gina Papouis
Hi there!
'you get worried' would be the correct version of what you are trying to say.
cheers
on "Take control of your mind",
Personals by Horaţiu Puşcă
Yes... / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I guess I should get rid of the rime, for avoiding those forced sentences, of which you have just sa
on "Midnight dream",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
hmmm... / Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
Alina,
There's wonder and uselessness together in your writing, beauty and profane, unnatural, n
on "Midnight dream",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
A late comment / Cătărău Alina - Andreea
I'm not sure if I got the idea, but I will try to put my finger on it.
I guess that you refer to
on "An old-fashioned fantasy",
Personals by Cătărău Alina - Andreea
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